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 I dreamed I met Tom Gabe or I dreamed I met Laura?

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PostSubject: I dreamed I met Tom Gabe or I dreamed I met Laura?   Mon May 28, 2012 2:25 pm

My band, The Sensitives just released our first album and now weve got a deal for a vinyl on the album with a label and are gonna take a song from the first demo/EP we made as a bonus for it.

The song has a line that goes "I dreamed I met Tom Gabel in my mothers yard........................." and so on (the lyrics are just a bunch of weird ass dreams Ive had that I puted into a song).

We have all the tracks because we recorded it ourselves in our rehearsal room and can make changes and so on and what I cant figure out is; should we change the lyrics from Tom to Laura?

The next line is "I hope the day I meet Tom Gabel itll be in my mothers yard.............".
You think the first one should be "Tom" and the second line "Laura"? Im thing the first one was in the past and the second line is future.

Heres the song if you wanna check it out, the Tom Gabel part comes in the last verse if you cant stand the rest of the song!=)
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PostSubject: Re: I dreamed I met Tom Gabe or I dreamed I met Laura?   Mon May 28, 2012 2:40 pm

I dig it. The music reminds me alot of Mischief Brew.
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PostSubject: Re: I dreamed I met Tom Gabe or I dreamed I met Laura?   Mon May 28, 2012 3:31 pm

I like the idea of changing the two names. It tells a story, which I like.
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PostSubject: Re: I dreamed I met Tom Gabe or I dreamed I met Laura?   Wed May 30, 2012 8:15 pm

I agree with the idea of switching for the second line. But, yeah, I dig the music, it would be cool to hear some more.
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PostSubject: Re: I dreamed I met Tom Gabe or I dreamed I met Laura?   Thu May 31, 2012 1:02 am

I like the second line switch as well.
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